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Change 1
As published
33 Disposals, etc.
(1) A person (A) who has the right to dispose of premises must not discriminate against another (B)—
(a) as to the terms on which A offers to dispose of the premises to B;
(b) by not disposing of the premises to B;
(c) in A's treatment of B with respect to things done in relation to persons seeking premises.
(2) Where an interest in a commonhold unit cannot be disposed of unless a particular person is a party to the disposal, that person must not discriminate against a person by not being a party to the disposal.
(3) A person who has the right to dispose of premises must not, in connection with anything done in relation to their occupation or disposal, harass—
(a) a person who occupies them;
(b) a person who applies for them.
(4) A person (A) who has the right to dispose of premises must not victimise another (B)—
(a) as to the terms on which A offers to dispose of the premises to B;
(b) by not disposing of the premises to B;
(c) in A's treatment of B with respect to things done in relation to persons seeking premises.
(5) Where an interest in a commonhold unit cannot be disposed of unless a particular person is a party to the disposal, that person must not victimise a person by not being a party to the disposal.
(6) In the application of section 26 for the purposes of subsection (3), neither of the following is a relevant protected characteristic—
(a) religion or belief;
(b) sexual orientation.
Your change, as a redline
33 Disposals, etc.
(1) A person (A) who has the right to dispose of premises must not discriminate against another (B)—
(a) as to the terms on which A offers to dispose of the premises to B;
(b) by not disposing of the premises to B;
(c) in A's treatment of B with respect to things done in relation to persons seeking premises.
(2) Where an interest in a commonhold unit cannot be disposed of unless a particular person is a party to the disposal, that person must not discriminate against a person by not being a party to the disposal.
(3) A person who has the right to dispose of premises must not, in connection with anything done in relation to their occupation or disposal, harass—
(a) a person who occupies them;
(b) a person who applies for them.
(4) A person (A) who has the right to dispose of premises must not victimise another (B)—
(a) as to the terms on which A offers to dispose of the premises to B;
(b) by not disposing of the premises to B;
(c) in A's treatment of B with respect to things done in relation to persons seeking premises.
(5) Where an interest in a commonhold unit cannot be disposed of unless a particular person is a party to the disposal, that person must not victimise a person by not being a party to the disposal.
(6) In the application of section 26 for the purposes of subsection (3), neither of the following is a relevant protected characteristic—
(a) religion or belief;
(b) sexual orientation.
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