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As published
40 Employees and applicants: harassment
(1) An employer (A) must not, in relation to employment by A, harass a person (B)—
(a) who is an employee of A's;
(b) who has applied to A for employment.
(1A) An employer (A) must not permit a third party to harass a person (B) who is an employee of A.
(1B) For the purposes of subsection (1A), A permits a third party to harass B only if—
(a) the third party harasses B in the course of B’s employment by A, and
(b) A failed to take all reasonable steps to prevent the third party from doing so.
(1C) In this section “third party” means a person other than—
(a) A, or
(b) an employee of A.
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Your change, as a redline
40 Employees and applicants: harassment
(1) An employer (A) must not, in relation to employment by A, harass a person (B)—
(a) who is an employee of A's;
(b) who has applied to A for employment.
(1A) An employer (A) must not permit a third party to harass a person (B) who is an employee of A.
(1B) For the purposes of subsection (1A), A permits a third party to harass B only if—
(a) the third party harasses B in the course of B’s employment by A, and
(b) A failed to take all reasonable steps to prevent the third party from doing so.
(1C) In this section “third party” means a person other than—
(a) A, or
(b) an employee of A.
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(3) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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