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10Z2 Notice of HIS's decisions
(1) If HIS decides to grant unconditionally an application made under section 10P, or to grant such application subject only to a condition which has been agreed in writing between HIS and the applicant, it must give the applicant notice of its decision.
(2) A notice under subsection (1) must state the agreed condition.
(3) If HIS decides to implement a proposal in relation to which it has given a person a condition notice or a notice under section 10Z, it must give that person notice of the decision.
(4) A notice under subsection (3) must—
(a) explain the right of appeal conferred by section 10Z4; and
(b) in the case of a decision to implement a proposal—
(i) in relation to which a condition notice has been given, state the condition as varied, the condition which is removed or (as the case may be) the additional condition imposed; or
(ii) of which notice has been given under subsection (1)(a) of section 10Z, state the condition subject to which the application is granted.
(5) Subject to subsection (6), a decision to implement a proposal in relation to which a condition notice has been given or of which notice has been given under subsection (1)(a) or (2) of section 10Z does not take effect—
(a) if no appeal is brought, until the period of 14 days referred to in section 10Z4(1) has elapsed; and
(b) if an appeal is brought, until that appeal is finally determined or is abandoned.
(6) Where the decision is to implement a proposal of which notice has been given under subsection (1)(a) of section 10Z and the applicant notifies HIS in writing, before the period of 14 days referred to in section 10Z4(1) has elapsed, that there will be no appeal, the decision takes effect on receipt of that notification.
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10Z2 Notice of HIS's decisions
(1) If HIS decides to grant unconditionally an application made under section 10P, or to grant such application subject only to a condition which has been agreed in writing between HIS and the applicant, it must give the applicant notice of its decision.
(2) A notice under subsection (1) must state the agreed condition.
(3) If HIS decides to implement a proposal in relation to which it has given a person a condition notice or a notice under section 10Z, it must give that person notice of the decision.
(4) A notice under subsection (3) must—
(a) explain the right of appeal conferred by section 10Z4; and
(b) in the case of a decision to implement a proposal—
(i) in relation to which a condition notice has been given, state the condition as varied, the condition which is removed or (as the case may be) the additional condition imposed; or
(ii) of which notice has been given under subsection (1)(a) of section 10Z, state the condition subject to which the application is granted.
(5) Subject to subsection (6), a decision to implement a proposal in relation to which a condition notice has been given or of which notice has been given under subsection (1)(a) or (2) of section 10Z does not take effect—
(a) if no appeal is brought, until the period of 14 days referred to in section 10Z4(1) has elapsed; and
(b) if an appeal is brought, until that appeal is finally determined or is abandoned.
(6) Where the decision is to implement a proposal of which notice has been given under subsection (1)(a) of section 10Z and the applicant notifies HIS in writing, before the period of 14 days referred to in section 10Z4(1) has elapsed, that there will be no appeal, the decision takes effect on receipt of that notification.
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