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Schedule 17 Specified memorials
Section 161
Part 1 War memorials
1 Arcade of Former Archbishops Palace, York (including the walls and railings under the arches of the Arcade).
2 Arch of Remembrance, Leicester.
3 Cenotaph, Whitehall, London.
4 Charles Church, Plymouth (being the entire derelict structure of that church).
5 Chatham Naval War Memorial.
6 Edith Cavell Memorial, St Martin’s Place, London.
7 Eleanor Cross, Sledmere.
8 Hall of Memory, Centenary Square, Birmingham.
9 Guards Memorial, Horse Guards Parade, London.
10 Liverpool Cenotaph.
11 Merchant Navy Memorial, Tower Hill, London.
12 Plymouth Naval War Memorial.
13 Port Sunlight War Memorial.
14 Portsmouth Naval War Memorial.
15 Preston War Memorial.
16 The Response, Newcastle upon Tyne.
17 Rochdale Cenotaph.
18 Royal Artillery Memorial, Hyde Park Corner, London.
19 Southampton Cenotaph.
20 Spalding War Memorial.
21 Statue of Captain Albert Ball, Nottingham Castle Gardens, Nottingham.
22 Town and County War Memorial, Northampton.
23 Wagoners’ Memorial, Sledmere.
24 Ely War Memorial (and the wall in which it is situated, extending east from the Almonry to the west end of No. 2 Fore Hill).
25 Monument to the Women of World War II, Whitehall, London.
Part 2 Parts of war memorials
26 The external walls and roof of Alcester Town Hall, and any fixtures attached to any of those walls or that roof.
Part 3 Other memorials
27 Statue of Sir Winston Churchill, Parliament Square, London.
28 Holocaust Memorial Garden, Hyde Park, London.
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Schedule 17 Specified memorials
Section 161
Part 1 War memorials
1 Arcade of Former Archbishops Palace, York (including the walls and railings under the arches of the Arcade).
2 Arch of Remembrance, Leicester.
3 Cenotaph, Whitehall, London.
4 Charles Church, Plymouth (being the entire derelict structure of that church).
5 Chatham Naval War Memorial.
6 Edith Cavell Memorial, St Martin’s Place, London.
7 Eleanor Cross, Sledmere.
8 Hall of Memory, Centenary Square, Birmingham.
9 Guards Memorial, Horse Guards Parade, London.
10 Liverpool Cenotaph.
11 Merchant Navy Memorial, Tower Hill, London.
12 Plymouth Naval War Memorial.
13 Port Sunlight War Memorial.
14 Portsmouth Naval War Memorial.
15 Preston War Memorial.
16 The Response, Newcastle upon Tyne.
17 Rochdale Cenotaph.
18 Royal Artillery Memorial, Hyde Park Corner, London.
19 Southampton Cenotaph.
20 Spalding War Memorial.
21 Statue of Captain Albert Ball, Nottingham Castle Gardens, Nottingham.
22 Town and County War Memorial, Northampton.
23 Wagoners’ Memorial, Sledmere.
24 Ely War Memorial (and the wall in which it is situated, extending east from the Almonry to the west end of No. 2 Fore Hill).
25 Monument to the Women of World War II, Whitehall, London.
Part 2 Parts of war memorials
26 The external walls and roof of Alcester Town Hall, and any fixtures attached to any of those walls or that roof.
Part 3 Other memorials
27 Statue of Sir Winston Churchill, Parliament Square, London.
28 Holocaust Memorial Garden, Hyde Park, London.
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