Write the words of this act the way you think they should read. Solon shows your change as a redline against the published text and pins it to that exact text, so it can never be applied to wording you did not see.
Change 1
As published
FIRST SCHEDULE Trades and Businesses exempted from the Provisions as to Early Closing Day
Section 1.
The sale by retail of intoxicating liquors.
The sale of refreshments, including the business carried on at a railway refreshment room.
The sale of motor, cycle, and air-craft supplies and accessories to travellers.
The sale of newspapers and periodicals.
The sale of meat, fish, milk, cream, bread, confectionery, fruit, vegetables, flowers, and other articles of a perishable nature.
The sale of tobacco and smokers’ requisites.
The business carried on at a railway bookstall on or adjoining a railway platform.
The sale of medicines and medical and surgical appliances.
Retail trade carried on at an exhibition or show, if the local authority certify that such retail trade is subsidiary or ancillary only to the main purpose of the exhibition or show.
Your change, as a redline
FIRST SCHEDULE Trades and Businesses exempted from the Provisions as to Early Closing Day
Section 1.
The sale by retail of intoxicating liquors.
The sale of refreshments, including the business carried on at a railway refreshment room.
The sale of motor, cycle, and air-craft supplies and accessories to travellers.
The sale of newspapers and periodicals.
The sale of meat, fish, milk, cream, bread, confectionery, fruit, vegetables, flowers, and other articles of a perishable nature.
The sale of tobacco and smokers’ requisites.
The business carried on at a railway bookstall on or adjoining a railway platform.
The sale of medicines and medical and surgical appliances.
Retail trade carried on at an exhibition or show, if the local authority certify that such retail trade is subsidiary or ancillary only to the main purpose of the exhibition or show.
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Who it helps, what it costs, what it fixes. It is what persuades people to support it.
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