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As published
88K Sections 88H and 88I , 88I and 88IA : supplementary
(1) Subsection (2) applies to any decision of the adjudicator—
(a) under section 88H(4) on whether to uphold an objection to admission arrangements, or
(b) under section 88I(4)(b) or (5)(b) on whether admission arrangements conform with the requirements relating to admission arrangements, ...
(c) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(2) Any decision of the adjudicator to which this subsection applies is binding on—
(a) the admission authority in question, and
(b) any other person or body.
(3) Where the adjudicator makes a decision mentioned in subsection (1), the adjudicator must publish a report containing—
(a) the adjudicator's decision on the objection or (as the case may be) on whether the admission arrangements conform with the requirements relating to admission arrangements, and
(b) the reasons for that decision.
(4) Regulations may make provision—
(a) requiring an admission authority for a maintained school in England or an Academy school to provide information which—
(i) falls within a prescribed description, and
(ii) is requested by the adjudicator for the purposes of the exercise by the adjudicator of functions under sections 88H , 88I or this section or of enabling the adjudicator to decide whether to exercise the power conferred by section 88I(5);
(b) as to the manner in which a report required to be published under subsection (3) is to be published;
(c) requiring such matters to be notified to such persons, and in such manner, as may be prescribed;
(d) prescribing circumstances in which an admission authority may revise the admission arrangements for their school in the light of any decision by the adjudicator relating to the admission arrangements for another school, and the procedure to be followed in such a case.
(5) In section 88I sections 88I and 88IA and this section “the requirements relating to admission arrangements” means—
(a) in relation to a maintained school, the requirements imposed by or under this Part as to the content of admission arrangements for maintained schools in England, and
(b) in relation to an Academy school, the requirements imposed by or under Academy arrangements as to the content of its admission arrangements.
Your change, as a redline
88K Sections 88H and 88I , 88I and 88IA : supplementary
(1) Subsection (2) applies to any decision of the adjudicator—
(a) under section 88H(4) on whether to uphold an objection to admission arrangements, or
(b) under section 88I(4)(b) or (5)(b) on whether admission arrangements conform with the requirements relating to admission arrangements, ...
(c) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(2) Any decision of the adjudicator to which this subsection applies is binding on—
(a) the admission authority in question, and
(b) any other person or body.
(3) Where the adjudicator makes a decision mentioned in subsection (1), the adjudicator must publish a report containing—
(a) the adjudicator's decision on the objection or (as the case may be) on whether the admission arrangements conform with the requirements relating to admission arrangements, and
(b) the reasons for that decision.
(4) Regulations may make provision—
(a) requiring an admission authority for a maintained school in England or an Academy school to provide information which—
(i) falls within a prescribed description, and
(ii) is requested by the adjudicator for the purposes of the exercise by the adjudicator of functions under sections 88H , 88I or this section or of enabling the adjudicator to decide whether to exercise the power conferred by section 88I(5);
(b) as to the manner in which a report required to be published under subsection (3) is to be published;
(c) requiring such matters to be notified to such persons, and in such manner, as may be prescribed;
(d) prescribing circumstances in which an admission authority may revise the admission arrangements for their school in the light of any decision by the adjudicator relating to the admission arrangements for another school, and the procedure to be followed in such a case.
(5) In section 88I sections 88I and 88IA and this section “the requirements relating to admission arrangements” means—
(a) in relation to a maintained school, the requirements imposed by or under this Part as to the content of admission arrangements for maintained schools in England, and
(b) in relation to an Academy school, the requirements imposed by or under Academy arrangements as to the content of its admission arrangements.
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