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As published
31ZG Financial assistance for person setting up or keeping voluntary contact register
(1) The Authority may, instead of keeping a voluntary contact register, give financial assistance to any person who sets up or keeps a voluntary contact register.
(2) Financial assistance under subsection (1) may be given in any form, and in particular, may be given by way of—
(a) grants,
(b) loans,
(c) guarantees, or
(d) incurring expenditure for the person assisted.
(3) Financial assistance under subsection (1) may be given on such terms and conditions as the Authority considers appropriate.
(4) A person receiving assistance under subsection (1) must comply with the terms and conditions on which it is given, and compliance may be enforced by the Authority.
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31ZG Financial assistance for person setting up or keeping voluntary contact register
(1) The Authority may, instead of keeping a voluntary contact register, give financial assistance to any person who sets up or keeps a voluntary contact register.
(2) Financial assistance under subsection (1) may be given in any form, and in particular, may be given by way of—
(a) grants,
(b) loans,
(c) guarantees, or
(d) incurring expenditure for the person assisted.
(3) Financial assistance under subsection (1) may be given on such terms and conditions as the Authority considers appropriate.
(4) A person receiving assistance under subsection (1) must comply with the terms and conditions on which it is given, and compliance may be enforced by the Authority.
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