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Change 1
As published
122B Report of section 122A inspection
(1) It is the general duty of the Chief Inspector, when conducting an inspection under section 122A, to report on the quality and effectiveness of the Academy proprietor’s leadership, management and governance in connection with its role as an Academy proprietor.
(2) The Chief Inspector’s report must (in particular) cover—
(a) the quality and effectiveness of any activities undertaken by the Academy proprietor to secure the provision of a quality education to registered pupils and students of its Academies;
(b) the quality and effectiveness of the Academy proprietor’s governance and executive leadership;
(c) the quality and effectiveness of any activities undertaken by the Academy proprietor to promote the wellbeing of children and young persons;
(d) the quality and effectiveness of any activities undertaken by the Academy proprietor to secure improvements in its Academies;
(e) the quality and effectiveness of the Academy proprietor’s management of its resources;
(f) such other matters as may be specified in regulations made by the Secretary of State.
(3) The Chief Inspector must send a copy of a report under section 122A(1)(b) to—
(a) the Academy proprietor, and
(b) the Secretary of State.
(4) The Academy proprietor must—
(a) make a copy of any report sent to it under subsection (3) available for inspection by members of the public,
(b) provide a copy of the report, free of charge, upon request, and
(c) take such steps as are reasonably practicable to secure that every registered parent of a pupil at an Academy school or alternative provision Academy of which the Academy proprietor is the proprietor receives a copy of the report within five working days following receipt of the report by the Academy proprietor.
(5) The Chief Inspector may send a copy of the report to such other persons as the Chief Inspector considers appropriate.
(6) The Chief Inspector may arrange for the report to be published in such manner as the Chief Inspector considers appropriate.
(7) In this section—
“child” means a person aged under 18, and references to “children” are to be read accordingly;
“wellbeing”, in relation to a child or young person, means their wellbeing so far as relating to the matters mentioned in section 10(2) of the Children Act 2004;
“working day” means a day other than a Saturday, a Sunday, Christmas Day, Good Friday or a bank holiday under the Banking and Financial Dealings Act 1971;
“young person” means any of the persons mentioned in section 10(9) of the Children Act 2004.
Your change, as a redline
122B Report of section 122A inspection
(1) It is the general duty of the Chief Inspector, when conducting an inspection under section 122A, to report on the quality and effectiveness of the Academy proprietor’s leadership, management and governance in connection with its role as an Academy proprietor.
(2) The Chief Inspector’s report must (in particular) cover—
(a) the quality and effectiveness of any activities undertaken by the Academy proprietor to secure the provision of a quality education to registered pupils and students of its Academies;
(b) the quality and effectiveness of the Academy proprietor’s governance and executive leadership;
(c) the quality and effectiveness of any activities undertaken by the Academy proprietor to promote the wellbeing of children and young persons;
(d) the quality and effectiveness of any activities undertaken by the Academy proprietor to secure improvements in its Academies;
(e) the quality and effectiveness of the Academy proprietor’s management of its resources;
(f) such other matters as may be specified in regulations made by the Secretary of State.
(3) The Chief Inspector must send a copy of a report under section 122A(1)(b) to—
(a) the Academy proprietor, and
(b) the Secretary of State.
(4) The Academy proprietor must—
(a) make a copy of any report sent to it under subsection (3) available for inspection by members of the public,
(b) provide a copy of the report, free of charge, upon request, and
(c) take such steps as are reasonably practicable to secure that every registered parent of a pupil at an Academy school or alternative provision Academy of which the Academy proprietor is the proprietor receives a copy of the report within five working days following receipt of the report by the Academy proprietor.
(5) The Chief Inspector may send a copy of the report to such other persons as the Chief Inspector considers appropriate.
(6) The Chief Inspector may arrange for the report to be published in such manner as the Chief Inspector considers appropriate.
(7) In this section—
“child” means a person aged under 18, and references to “children” are to be read accordingly;
“wellbeing”, in relation to a child or young person, means their wellbeing so far as relating to the matters mentioned in section 10(2) of the Children Act 2004;
“working day” means a day other than a Saturday, a Sunday, Christmas Day, Good Friday or a bank holiday under the Banking and Financial Dealings Act 1971;
“young person” means any of the persons mentioned in section 10(9) of the Children Act 2004.
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