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As published
138 Crown application
(1) This Chapter binds the Crown and has effect in relation to any premises licence, or club premises certificate, which relates to land in which there is—
(a) an interest belonging to Her Majesty in right of the Crown,
(b) an interest belonging to a government department, or
(c) an interest held in trust for Her Majesty for the purposes of such a department.
(2) This Chapter also applies in relation to any premises licence, or club premises certificate, which relates to—
(a) land which is vested in, but not occupied by, Her Majesty in right of the Duchy of Lancaster, and
(b) land which is vested in, but not occupied by, the possessor for the time being of the Duchy of Cornwall.
(3) Provision made by or under this Chapter applies to persons in the public service of the Crown as it applies to other persons.
(4) But nothing in this Chapter affects Her Majesty in Her private capacity.
Your change, as a redline
138 Crown application
(1) This Chapter binds the Crown and has effect in relation to any premises licence, or club premises certificate, which relates to land in which there is—
(a) an interest belonging to Her Majesty in right of the Crown,
(b) an interest belonging to a government department, or
(c) an interest held in trust for Her Majesty for the purposes of such a department.
(2) This Chapter also applies in relation to any premises licence, or club premises certificate, which relates to—
(a) land which is vested in, but not occupied by, Her Majesty in right of the Duchy of Lancaster, and
(b) land which is vested in, but not occupied by, the possessor for the time being of the Duchy of Cornwall.
(3) Provision made by or under this Chapter applies to persons in the public service of the Crown as it applies to other persons.
(4) But nothing in this Chapter affects Her Majesty in Her private capacity.
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