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As published
100A Standard and late temporary event notices
(1) For the purposes of section 100(7)(a), a temporary event notice must be given in accordance with—
(a) subsection (2), in which case the notice is a “standard temporary event notice”, or
(b) subsection (3), in which case the notice is a “late temporary event notice”.
(2) A temporary event notice is given in accordance with this subsection if, no later than ten working days before the day on which the event period begins,—
(a) it is given to the relevant licensing authority by means of a relevant electronic facility, or
(b) it is given to the relevant licensing authority (otherwise than by means of a relevant electronic facility) and to each relevant person.
(3) A temporary event notice is given in accordance with this subsection if—
(a) it is given to the relevant licensing authority by means of a relevant electronic facility no later than five working days, but no earlier than nine working days, before the day the event period begins, or
(b) both of the following are satisfied—
(i) it is given to the relevant licensing authority (otherwise than by means of a relevant electronic facility) and to each relevant person no later than five working days before the day on which the event period begins;
(ii) it is given to at least one of those persons no earlier than nine working days before the day on which that event period begins.
(4) Where a temporary event notice (the “original notice”) is given by the premises user to the relevant licensing authority by means of a relevant electronic facility as referred to in subsection (2)(a) or (3)(a)—
(a) the licensing authority must give a copy of the original notice to each relevant person no later than the end of the first working day after the day on which the original notice was given to the authority, and
(b) for the purposes of this Act, the copy is to be treated as if it were the original notice.
(5) In this section “event period” in relation to a temporary event notice means the event period specified in the notice.
Your change, as a redline
100A Standard and late temporary event notices
(1) For the purposes of section 100(7)(a), a temporary event notice must be given in accordance with—
(a) subsection (2), in which case the notice is a “standard temporary event notice”, or
(b) subsection (3), in which case the notice is a “late temporary event notice”.
(2) A temporary event notice is given in accordance with this subsection if, no later than ten working days before the day on which the event period begins,—
(a) it is given to the relevant licensing authority by means of a relevant electronic facility, or
(b) it is given to the relevant licensing authority (otherwise than by means of a relevant electronic facility) and to each relevant person.
(3) A temporary event notice is given in accordance with this subsection if—
(a) it is given to the relevant licensing authority by means of a relevant electronic facility no later than five working days, but no earlier than nine working days, before the day the event period begins, or
(b) both of the following are satisfied—
(i) it is given to the relevant licensing authority (otherwise than by means of a relevant electronic facility) and to each relevant person no later than five working days before the day on which the event period begins;
(ii) it is given to at least one of those persons no earlier than nine working days before the day on which that event period begins.
(4) Where a temporary event notice (the “original notice”) is given by the premises user to the relevant licensing authority by means of a relevant electronic facility as referred to in subsection (2)(a) or (3)(a)—
(a) the licensing authority must give a copy of the original notice to each relevant person no later than the end of the first working day after the day on which the original notice was given to the authority, and
(b) for the purposes of this Act, the copy is to be treated as if it were the original notice.
(5) In this section “event period” in relation to a temporary event notice means the event period specified in the notice.
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