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41ZD Notification by the London licensing authority
(1) A London licensing authority that grants an application (or any part of an application) on a direction under section 41ZB must as soon as possible give notice to that effect to—
(a) the applicant,
(b) each responsible authority in relation to the premises to which the application relates,
(c) any person who made relevant representations under section 35 in respect of the application, and
(d) the chief officer of police for the police area (or each police area) in which the premises are situated.
(2) The notice under subsection (1) must—
(a) specify the time when any variation takes effect, and
(b) specify any modifications to conditions of the licence.
(3) The time for the purposes of subsection (2) is the time specified in the application or, if that time is before the applicant is given notice under this section, such later time as the London licensing authority specifies in the notice.
(4) A London licensing authority that rejects an application (or any part of an application) on a direction under section 41ZB must as soon as possible give notice to that effect to—
(a) the applicant,
(b) each responsible authority in relation to the premises to which the application relates,
(c) any person who made relevant representations under section 35 in respect of the application, and
(d) the chief officer of police for the police area (or each police area) in which the premises are situated.
(5) A notice under subsection (1) or (4) must state the Mayor’s reasons for giving the direction as notified to the London licensing authority under section 41ZB(8).
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41ZD Notification by the London licensing authority
(1) A London licensing authority that grants an application (or any part of an application) on a direction under section 41ZB must as soon as possible give notice to that effect to—
(a) the applicant,
(b) each responsible authority in relation to the premises to which the application relates,
(c) any person who made relevant representations under section 35 in respect of the application, and
(d) the chief officer of police for the police area (or each police area) in which the premises are situated.
(2) The notice under subsection (1) must—
(a) specify the time when any variation takes effect, and
(b) specify any modifications to conditions of the licence.
(3) The time for the purposes of subsection (2) is the time specified in the application or, if that time is before the applicant is given notice under this section, such later time as the London licensing authority specifies in the notice.
(4) A London licensing authority that rejects an application (or any part of an application) on a direction under section 41ZB must as soon as possible give notice to that effect to—
(a) the applicant,
(b) each responsible authority in relation to the premises to which the application relates,
(c) any person who made relevant representations under section 35 in respect of the application, and
(d) the chief officer of police for the police area (or each police area) in which the premises are situated.
(5) A notice under subsection (1) or (4) must state the Mayor’s reasons for giving the direction as notified to the London licensing authority under section 41ZB(8).
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