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Change 1
As published
82 Notification of change of name or alteration of rules of club
(1) Where a club—
(a) holds a club premises certificate, or
(b) has made an application for a club premises certificate which has not been determined by the relevant licensing authority,
the secretary of the club must give the relevant licensing authority notice of any change in the name, or alteration made to the rules, of the club.
(2) Subsection (1) is subject to regulations under section 92(1) (power to prescribe fee to accompany application).
(3) A notice under subsection (1) by a club which holds a club premises certificate must be accompanied by the certificate or, if that is not practicable, by a statement of the reasons for the failure to produce the certificate.
(4) An authority notified under this section of a change in the name, or alteration to the rules, of a club must amend the club premises certificate accordingly.
(5) But nothing in subsection (4) requires or authorises the making of any amendment to a club premises certificate so as to change the premises to which the certificate relates (and no amendment made under that subsection to a club premises certificate has effect so as to change those premises).
(6) If a notice required by this section is not given within the 28 days following the day on which the change of name or alteration to the rules is made, the secretary of the club commits an offence.
(7) A person guilty of an offence under subsection (6) is liable on summary conviction to a fine not exceeding level 2 on the standard scale.
Your change, as a redline
82 Notification of change of name or alteration of rules of club
(1) Where a club—
(a) holds a club premises certificate, or
(b) has made an application for a club premises certificate which has not been determined by the relevant licensing authority,
the secretary of the club must give the relevant licensing authority notice of any change in the name, or alteration made to the rules, of the club.
(2) Subsection (1) is subject to regulations under section 92(1) (power to prescribe fee to accompany application).
(3) A notice under subsection (1) by a club which holds a club premises certificate must be accompanied by the certificate or, if that is not practicable, by a statement of the reasons for the failure to produce the certificate.
(4) An authority notified under this section of a change in the name, or alteration to the rules, of a club must amend the club premises certificate accordingly.
(5) But nothing in subsection (4) requires or authorises the making of any amendment to a club premises certificate so as to change the premises to which the certificate relates (and no amendment made under that subsection to a club premises certificate has effect so as to change those premises).
(6) If a notice required by this section is not given within the 28 days following the day on which the change of name or alteration to the rules is made, the secretary of the club commits an offence.
(7) A person guilty of an offence under subsection (6) is liable on summary conviction to a fine not exceeding level 2 on the standard scale.
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