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As published
70 Grants in respect of caravan sites for gipsies
(1) This section applies to expenditure of a capital nature incurred by any local authority under section 24 of the Caravan Sites and Control of Development Act 1960 (provision of caravan sites by local authorities) in respect of caravan sites provided for the accommodation of persons to whom subsection (8A) of that section applies.
(2) The Secretary of State may, with the approval of the Treasury, make out money provided by Parliament grants in respect of expenditure which, in his opinion, is expenditure to which this section applies.
(3) Any grants under this section shall be made on such terms and conditions (if any) as the Secretary of State may, with the approval of the Treasury, determine.
(4) In this section—
“caravan” has the meaning assigned to it by the Caravan Sites and Control of Development Act 1960 ...
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Your change, as a redline
70 Grants in respect of caravan sites for gipsies
(1) This section applies to expenditure of a capital nature incurred by any local authority under section 24 of the Caravan Sites and Control of Development Act 1960 (provision of caravan sites by local authorities) in respect of caravan sites provided for the accommodation of persons to whom subsection (8A) of that section applies.
(2) The Secretary of State may, with the approval of the Treasury, make out money provided by Parliament grants in respect of expenditure which, in his opinion, is expenditure to which this section applies.
(3) Any grants under this section shall be made on such terms and conditions (if any) as the Secretary of State may, with the approval of the Treasury, determine.
(4) In this section—
“caravan” has the meaning assigned to it by the Caravan Sites and Control of Development Act 1960 ...
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