Write the words of this act the way you think they should read. Solon shows your change as a redline against the published text and pins it to that exact text, so it can never be applied to wording you did not see.
Change 1
As published
FIRST SCHEDULE Declaration by Master of Vessel
Section 27.
I, A.B., master of the [state the name of the ship or vessel], arriving from [state the place], do, as required by law, solemnly declare that I have, to the best of my knowledge and belief, delivered or caused to be delivered to the Post Office every mail bag, package, postal packet, or parcel of postal packets that was on board the [state the name of the ship], except such packets as are exempted by law.
Your change, as a redline
FIRST SCHEDULE Declaration by Master of Vessel
Section 27.
I, A.B., master of the [state the name of the ship or vessel], arriving from [state the place], do, as required by law, solemnly declare that I have, to the best of my knowledge and belief, delivered or caused to be delivered to the Post Office every mail bag, package, postal packet, or parcel of postal packets that was on board the [state the name of the ship], except such packets as are exempted by law.
One line that says what changes, such as "Halve the dog tax".
Who it helps, what it costs, what it fixes. It is what persuades people to support it.
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