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As published
26 Duties of masters of outward-bound vessels as respects mail bags
(1) Every master of a vessel outward bound shall receive on board his vessel every mail bag tendered to him by an officer of the Post Office for conveyance, and having received it shall deliver it, on arriving at the port or place of his destination, without delay.
(2) If he fails to comply with this section he shall forfeit two hundred pounds.
Your change, as a redline
26 Duties of masters of outward-bound vessels as respects mail bags
(1) Every master of a vessel outward bound shall receive on board his vessel every mail bag tendered to him by an officer of the Post Office for conveyance, and having received it shall deliver it, on arriving at the port or place of his destination, without delay.
(2) If he fails to comply with this section he shall forfeit two hundred pounds.
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