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As published
69 Endeavouring to procure the commission of any felony or misdemeanor
If any person solicits or endeavours to procure any other person to commit an offence punishable on indictment under this Act, he shall be guilty of a misdemeanour, and shall on conviction be liable at the discretion of the court to imprisonment, with or without hard labour, for any term- not exceeding two years.
Your change, as a redline
69 Endeavouring to procure the commission of any felony or misdemeanor
If any person solicits or endeavours to procure any other person to commit an offence punishable on indictment under this Act, he shall be guilty of a misdemeanour, and shall on conviction be liable at the discretion of the court to imprisonment, with or without hard labour, for any term- not exceeding two years.
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