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9A Procedure for orders made by the Welsh Ministers under section ... 7
(1) Before the Welsh Ministers make an order under section ... 7 they must consult—
(a) such local authorities in Wales,
(b) such representatives of local government in Wales, and
(c) such other persons (if any),
as appear to them to be likely to be affected by their proposals.
(2) If, following consultation under subsection (1), the Welsh Ministers propose to make an order under section ... 7 they must lay before the National Assembly for Wales a document which—
(a) explains their proposals,
(b) sets them out in the form of a draft order, and
(c) gives details of consultation under subsection (1).
(3) Where a document relating to proposals is laid before the National Assembly for Wales under subsection (2), no draft of an order under section ... 7 to give effect to the proposals (with or without modifications) is to be laid before the National Assembly for Wales in accordance with section ... 7(10) until after the expiry of the period of sixty days beginning with the day on which the document was laid.
(4) In calculating the period mentioned in subsection (3) no account is to be taken of any time during which the National Assembly is dissolved or is in recess for more than four days.
(5) In preparing a draft order under section ... 7 the Welsh Ministers must consider any representations made during the period mentioned in subsection (3).
(6) A draft order under section ... 7 which is laid before the National Assembly for Wales must be accompanied by a statement of the Welsh Ministers giving details of—
(a) any representations considered in accordance with subsection (5), and
(b) any changes made to the proposals contained in the document laid before the National Assembly for Wales under subsection (2).
(7) Nothing in this section applies to an order under section ... 7 which is made only for the purpose of amending an earlier order under that section—
(a) so as to extend the earlier order, or any provision of the earlier order, to a particular authority or to authorities of a particular description, or
(b) so that the earlier order, or any provision of the earlier order, ceases to apply to a particular authority or to authorities of a particular description.
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9A Procedure for orders made by the Welsh Ministers under section ... 7
(1) Before the Welsh Ministers make an order under section ... 7 they must consult—
(a) such local authorities in Wales,
(b) such representatives of local government in Wales, and
(c) such other persons (if any),
as appear to them to be likely to be affected by their proposals.
(2) If, following consultation under subsection (1), the Welsh Ministers propose to make an order under section ... 7 they must lay before the National Assembly for Wales a document which—
(a) explains their proposals,
(b) sets them out in the form of a draft order, and
(c) gives details of consultation under subsection (1).
(3) Where a document relating to proposals is laid before the National Assembly for Wales under subsection (2), no draft of an order under section ... 7 to give effect to the proposals (with or without modifications) is to be laid before the National Assembly for Wales in accordance with section ... 7(10) until after the expiry of the period of sixty days beginning with the day on which the document was laid.
(4) In calculating the period mentioned in subsection (3) no account is to be taken of any time during which the National Assembly is dissolved or is in recess for more than four days.
(5) In preparing a draft order under section ... 7 the Welsh Ministers must consider any representations made during the period mentioned in subsection (3).
(6) A draft order under section ... 7 which is laid before the National Assembly for Wales must be accompanied by a statement of the Welsh Ministers giving details of—
(a) any representations considered in accordance with subsection (5), and
(b) any changes made to the proposals contained in the document laid before the National Assembly for Wales under subsection (2).
(7) Nothing in this section applies to an order under section ... 7 which is made only for the purpose of amending an earlier order under that section—
(a) so as to extend the earlier order, or any provision of the earlier order, to a particular authority or to authorities of a particular description, or
(b) so that the earlier order, or any provision of the earlier order, ceases to apply to a particular authority or to authorities of a particular description.
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