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Change 1
As published
30 Street trading.
(1) Subject to subsection (2) of this section, no child shall engage or be employed in street trading.
(2) An education authority may make byelaws authorising children who have attained the age of fourteen years to be employed by their parents in street trading to such extent as may be specified in the byelaws, and for regulating street trading under the byelaws by persons who are so authorised to be employed in such trading;and byelaws so made may distinguish between persons of different ages and sexes and between different localities, and may contain provisions—
(a) forbidding any such person to engage or be employed in street trading unless he holds a licence granted by the authority, and regulating the conditions on which such licences may be granted, suspended, and revoked;
(b) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(c) requiring such persons so engaged or employed to wear badges;
(d) regulating in any other respect the conduct of such persons while so engaged or employed.
(3) Byelaws made under subsection (2) shall contain provisions determining the days and hours during which, and the places at which, such persons may engage or be employed in street trading.
Your change, as a redline
30 Street trading.
(1) Subject to subsection (2) of this section, no child shall engage or be employed in street trading.
(2) An education authority may make byelaws authorising children who have attained the age of fourteen years to be employed by their parents in street trading to such extent as may be specified in the byelaws, and for regulating street trading under the byelaws by persons who are so authorised to be employed in such trading;and byelaws so made may distinguish between persons of different ages and sexes and between different localities, and may contain provisions—
(a) forbidding any such person to engage or be employed in street trading unless he holds a licence granted by the authority, and regulating the conditions on which such licences may be granted, suspended, and revoked;
(b) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(c) requiring such persons so engaged or employed to wear badges;
(d) regulating in any other respect the conduct of such persons while so engaged or employed.
(3) Byelaws made under subsection (2) shall contain provisions determining the days and hours during which, and the places at which, such persons may engage or be employed in street trading.
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