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134 Postponement of repeal of Burgh Police (Scotland) Acts and local statutory provisions.
(1) The repeal of—
(a) the Burgh Police (Scotland) Acts 1892 to 1911; and
(b) the local statutory provisions to which subsection (6) of section 225 of the Local Government (Scotland) Act 1973 applies,
which by virtue, respectively, of
(i) subsection (1) of section 229 of the said Act of 1973; and
(ii) the said subsection (6),
falls to take place at the end of 1982 shall, subject to subsection (2) below, sections 135 and 137 of this Act and any order thereunder, be postponed until the end of 1984 and in each of the said subsections, at the beginning there shall be inserted the words “Subject to sections 134(2), 135 and 137 of the Civic Government (Scotland) Act 1982 and any order under these sections,” and for the words “1982” there shall be substituted the words “1984”.
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134 Postponement of repeal of Burgh Police (Scotland) Acts and local statutory provisions.
(1) The repeal of—
(a) the Burgh Police (Scotland) Acts 1892 to 1911; and
(b) the local statutory provisions to which subsection (6) of section 225 of the Local Government (Scotland) Act 1973 applies,
which by virtue, respectively, of
(i) subsection (1) of section 229 of the said Act of 1973; and
(ii) the said subsection (6),
falls to take place at the end of 1982 shall, subject to subsection (2) below, sections 135 and 137 of this Act and any order thereunder, be postponed until the end of 1984 and in each of the said subsections, at the beginning there shall be inserted the words “Subject to sections 134(2), 135 and 137 of the Civic Government (Scotland) Act 1982 and any order under these sections,” and for the words “1982” there shall be substituted the words “1984”.
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