Write the words of this act the way you think they should read. Solon shows your change as a redline against the published text and pins it to that exact text, so it can never be applied to wording you did not see.
Change 1
As published
27C Knife dealers' licences: conditions
(1) In granting or renewing a knife dealer's licence, a licensing authority—
(a) must attach to the licence such conditions as are specified (in particular or in general) by order by the Scottish Ministers;
(b) may, without prejudice to section 3B and paragraph 5 of Schedule 1, attach to the licence different conditions in relation to different articles or different classes of article;
(c) may, without prejudice to that section and paragraph, attach to the licence conditions for or in connection with—
(i) the keeping of records by the holder of the licence;
(ii) the storage of articles mentioned in section 27A(2); and
(iii) the display of such articles.
(2) An order under subsection (1)(a) may provide for different conditions to apply to different articles or different classes of article.
Your change, as a redline
27C Knife dealers' licences: conditions
(1) In granting or renewing a knife dealer's licence, a licensing authority—
(a) must attach to the licence such conditions as are specified (in particular or in general) by order by the Scottish Ministers;
(b) may, without prejudice to section 3B and paragraph 5 of Schedule 1, attach to the licence different conditions in relation to different articles or different classes of article;
(c) may, without prejudice to that section and paragraph, attach to the licence conditions for or in connection with—
(i) the keeping of records by the holder of the licence;
(ii) the storage of articles mentioned in section 27A(2); and
(iii) the display of such articles.
(2) An order under subsection (1)(a) may provide for different conditions to apply to different articles or different classes of article.
One line that says what changes, such as "Halve the dog tax".
Who it helps, what it costs, what it fixes. It is what persuades people to support it.
A proposal here is not law. Support on Solon is evidence that people want the change; the official route says what it takes to make it law.
Sign in to file your proposal. What you have written stays on this page.
Ask what your change would do, who would gain and who would bear a cost, and where something like it is already law. The assistant reads your draft as it stands, cites the law and the studies it finds, and takes no side. What you file stays yours.