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As published
33E Metal dealer to keep records for each place of business
(1) A metal dealer must keep separate records of the required information in relation to—
(a) each place of business operated by the dealer, and
(b) any metal acquired, processed or disposed of otherwise than at such a place of business.
(2) Where a metal dealer records the required information in books, the dealer must not, at any time at a place of business, use more than—
(a) one book for recording the required information about metal acquired, and
(b) one book for recording the required information about metal processed or disposed of.
(3) In this section—
“place of business” means a place of business operated by a metal dealer in the ordinary course of that dealer's business as a metal dealer,
“required information” means the information about metal acquired, processed or disposed of that a dealer is required to record under or by virtue of section 33C(2), (4) or (6).
Your change, as a redline
33E Metal dealer to keep records for each place of business
(1) A metal dealer must keep separate records of the required information in relation to—
(a) each place of business operated by the dealer, and
(b) any metal acquired, processed or disposed of otherwise than at such a place of business.
(2) Where a metal dealer records the required information in books, the dealer must not, at any time at a place of business, use more than—
(a) one book for recording the required information about metal acquired, and
(b) one book for recording the required information about metal processed or disposed of.
(3) In this section—
“place of business” means a place of business operated by a metal dealer in the ordinary course of that dealer's business as a metal dealer,
“required information” means the information about metal acquired, processed or disposed of that a dealer is required to record under or by virtue of section 33C(2), (4) or (6).
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