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As published
53 Causing disaffection.
(1) Any person who causes, or attempts to cause, or does any act calculated to cause, disaffection amongst the members of any police force, or induces or attempts to induce, or does any act calculated to induce, any member of a police force to withhold his services or to commit breaches of discipline, shall be guilty of an offence and liable—
(a) on summary conviction, to imprisonment for a term not exceeding six months or to a fine not exceeding £100, or to both;
(b) on conviction on indictment, to imprisonment for a term not exceeding two years or to a fine or to both.
(2) This section applies to special constables appointed for a police area as it applies to members of a police force.
Your change, as a redline
53 Causing disaffection.
(1) Any person who causes, or attempts to cause, or does any act calculated to cause, disaffection amongst the members of any police force, or induces or attempts to induce, or does any act calculated to induce, any member of a police force to withhold his services or to commit breaches of discipline, shall be guilty of an offence and liable—
(a) on summary conviction, to imprisonment for a term not exceeding six months or to a fine not exceeding £100, or to both;
(b) on conviction on indictment, to imprisonment for a term not exceeding two years or to a fine or to both.
(2) This section applies to special constables appointed for a police area as it applies to members of a police force.
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