Propose a change

Code pénal

Write the words of this act the way you think they should read. Solon shows your change as a redline against the published text and pins it to that exact text, so it can never be applied to wording you did not see.

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Article

What to do with it

Reword itRepeal itAdd a new article after it

As published

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Seront punis des peines portées par les articles précédents, et d'après les distinctions qui y sont établies, ceux qui auront détruit ou tenté de détruire, par l'effet d'une explosion, des édifices, navires, bateaux, voitures, wagons, magasins, chantiers ou autres constructions. Section II.-De la destruction des constructions, des machines à vapeur et des appareils télégraphiques

Your wording

Your change, as a redline

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Title

One line that says what changes, such as "Halve the dog tax".

Why

Who it helps, what it costs, what it fixes. It is what persuades people to support it.

A proposal here is not law. Support on Solon is evidence that people want the change; the official route says what it takes to make it law.