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Change 1
As published
SEVENTH SCHEDULE London Passenger Transport Area
Sections 15, 16, 17, 99 and 107.
Part I
The London Passenger Transport Area shall consist of the area comprised within the continuous purple line shown on the signed map (which expression in this Schedule means the map signed in triplicate by the Rt. Honourable the Earl of Lytton, the Chairman of the Joint Committee of the House of Lords and the House of Commons to which the Bill for this Act was referred and which has been deposited, as to one copy, in the Parliament Office of the House of Lords, as to another copy, in the Committee and Private Bill Office of the House of Commons, and, as to a third copy, at the Ministry of Transport).
Parts II—IV. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Your change, as a redline
SEVENTH SCHEDULE London Passenger Transport Area
Sections 15, 16, 17, 99 and 107.
Part I
The London Passenger Transport Area shall consist of the area comprised within the continuous purple line shown on the signed map (which expression in this Schedule means the map signed in triplicate by the Rt. Honourable the Earl of Lytton, the Chairman of the Joint Committee of the House of Lords and the House of Commons to which the Bill for this Act was referred and which has been deposited, as to one copy, in the Parliament Office of the House of Lords, as to another copy, in the Committee and Private Bill Office of the House of Commons, and, as to a third copy, at the Ministry of Transport).
Parts II—IV. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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