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SCHEDULE 3 Birds which may be Sold
Sections 6 and 22.
Part I Alive at all Times if Ringed and Bred in Captivity
Common name | Scientific name
Blackbird | Turdus merula
Brambling | Fringilla montifringilla
Bullfinch | Pyrrhula pyrrhula
Bunting, Reed | Emberiza schoeniclus
Chaffinch | Fringilla coelebs
Dunnock | Prunella modularis
Goldfinch | Carduelis carduelis
Greenfinch | Carduelis chloris
Jackdaw | Corvus monedula
Jay | Garrulus glandarius
Linnet | Carduelis cannabina
Magpie | Pica pica
Owl, Barn | Tyto alba
Redpoll | Carduelis flammea
Siskin | Carduelis spinus
Starling | Sturnus vulgaris
Thrush, Song | Turdus philomelos
Twite | Carduelis flavirostris
Yellowhammer | Emberiza citrinella
Part IA Alive if taken in captivity or by certain persons outside close season or during first 28 days of close season
Common name | Scientific name
Grouse, Red | Lagopus lagopus scoticus
Mallard | Anas platyrhynchos
Partridge, Grey | Perdix perdix
Partridge, Red-legged | Alectoris rufa
Pheasant, Common | Phasianus colchicus
Part II Dead at all Times
Common name | Scientific name
. . . | . . .
Woodpigeon | Columba palumbus
Part IIA Dead if killed outside close season by certain persons
Common name | Scientific name
Coot | Fulica atra
Duck, Tufted | Aythya fuligula
Grouse, Black | Tetrao tetrix
Grouse, Red | Lagopus lagopus scoticus
Mallard | Anas platyrhynchos
Partridge, Grey | Perdix perdix
Partridge, Red-legged | Alectoris rufa
Pheasant, Common | Phasianus colchicus
Pintail | Anas acuta
Plover, Golden | Pluvialis apricaria
Pochard | Aythya ferina
Ptarmigan | Lagopus mutus
Shoveler | Anas clypeata
Snipe, Common | Gallinago gallinago
Teal | Anas crecca
Wigeon | Anas penelope
Woodcock | Scolopax rusticola
Part III Dead from 1st September to 28th February
Common name | Scientific name
Capercaillie | Tetrao urogallus
Coot | Fulica atra
Duck, Tufted | Aythya fuligula
Mallard | Anas platyrhynchos
Pintail | Anas acuta
Plover, Golden | Pluvialis apricaria
Pochard | Aythya ferina
Shoveler | Anas clypeata
Snipe, Common | Gallinago gallinago
Teal | Anas crecca
Wigeon | Anas penelope
Woodcock | Scolopax rusticola
Note. The common name or names given in the first column of this Schedule are included by way of guidance only; in the event of any dispute or proceedings, the common name or names shall not be taken into account.
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SCHEDULE 3 Birds which may be Sold
Sections 6 and 22.
Part I Alive at all Times if Ringed and Bred in Captivity
Common name | Scientific name
Blackbird | Turdus merula
Brambling | Fringilla montifringilla
Bullfinch | Pyrrhula pyrrhula
Bunting, Reed | Emberiza schoeniclus
Chaffinch | Fringilla coelebs
Dunnock | Prunella modularis
Goldfinch | Carduelis carduelis
Greenfinch | Carduelis chloris
Jackdaw | Corvus monedula
Jay | Garrulus glandarius
Linnet | Carduelis cannabina
Magpie | Pica pica
Owl, Barn | Tyto alba
Redpoll | Carduelis flammea
Siskin | Carduelis spinus
Starling | Sturnus vulgaris
Thrush, Song | Turdus philomelos
Twite | Carduelis flavirostris
Yellowhammer | Emberiza citrinella
Part IA Alive if taken in captivity or by certain persons outside close season or during first 28 days of close season
Common name | Scientific name
Grouse, Red | Lagopus lagopus scoticus
Mallard | Anas platyrhynchos
Partridge, Grey | Perdix perdix
Partridge, Red-legged | Alectoris rufa
Pheasant, Common | Phasianus colchicus
Part II Dead at all Times
Common name | Scientific name
. . . | . . .
Woodpigeon | Columba palumbus
Part IIA Dead if killed outside close season by certain persons
Common name | Scientific name
Coot | Fulica atra
Duck, Tufted | Aythya fuligula
Grouse, Black | Tetrao tetrix
Grouse, Red | Lagopus lagopus scoticus
Mallard | Anas platyrhynchos
Partridge, Grey | Perdix perdix
Partridge, Red-legged | Alectoris rufa
Pheasant, Common | Phasianus colchicus
Pintail | Anas acuta
Plover, Golden | Pluvialis apricaria
Pochard | Aythya ferina
Ptarmigan | Lagopus mutus
Shoveler | Anas clypeata
Snipe, Common | Gallinago gallinago
Teal | Anas crecca
Wigeon | Anas penelope
Woodcock | Scolopax rusticola
Part III Dead from 1st September to 28th February
Common name | Scientific name
Capercaillie | Tetrao urogallus
Coot | Fulica atra
Duck, Tufted | Aythya fuligula
Mallard | Anas platyrhynchos
Pintail | Anas acuta
Plover, Golden | Pluvialis apricaria
Pochard | Aythya ferina
Shoveler | Anas clypeata
Snipe, Common | Gallinago gallinago
Teal | Anas crecca
Wigeon | Anas penelope
Woodcock | Scolopax rusticola
Note. The common name or names given in the first column of this Schedule are included by way of guidance only; in the event of any dispute or proceedings, the common name or names shall not be taken into account.
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