Write the words of this act the way you think they should read. Solon shows your change as a redline against the published text and pins it to that exact text, so it can never be applied to wording you did not see.
Change 1
As published
22 The local policing plan.
(1) Each district commander shall issue, and may from time to time revise, a plan (“the local policing plan”) setting out the proposed arrangements for the policing of the police district.
(2) The local policing plan may relate to matters to which the policing plan also relates, or to other matters, but in any event shall be so framed as to be consistent with the policing plan.
(3) Before issuing or revising a local policing plan, the district commander shall consult the policing and community safety partnership whose district is, or includes, the police district and take account of any views expressed.
(3A) Before issuing or revising a local policing plan for a police district established under section 20(2), the district commander shall also consult the district policing and community safety partnership and take account of any views expressed.
(4) The district commander shall arrange for the local policing plan issued or revised under this section to be published in such manner as appears to him to be appropriate.
Your change, as a redline
22 The local policing plan.
(1) Each district commander shall issue, and may from time to time revise, a plan (“the local policing plan”) setting out the proposed arrangements for the policing of the police district.
(2) The local policing plan may relate to matters to which the policing plan also relates, or to other matters, but in any event shall be so framed as to be consistent with the policing plan.
(3) Before issuing or revising a local policing plan, the district commander shall consult the policing and community safety partnership whose district is, or includes, the police district and take account of any views expressed.
(3A) Before issuing or revising a local policing plan for a police district established under section 20(2), the district commander shall also consult the district policing and community safety partnership and take account of any views expressed.
(4) The district commander shall arrange for the local policing plan issued or revised under this section to be published in such manner as appears to him to be appropriate.
One line that says what changes, such as "Halve the dog tax".
Who it helps, what it costs, what it fixes. It is what persuades people to support it.
A proposal here is not law. Support on Solon is evidence that people want the change; the official route says what it takes to make it law.
Sign in to file your proposal. What you have written stays on this page.
Ask what your change would do, who would gain and who would bear a cost, and where something like it is already law. The assistant reads your draft as it stands, cites the law and the studies it finds, and takes no side. What you file stays yours.