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As published
41 Destination of reports: non-maintained schools
(1) In the case of a report of a section 28 inspection of a school other than a maintained school, the person making the report must without delay—
(a) send a copy of the report together with the summary of it—
(i) to the proprietor of the school, and
(ii) (unless the person making it is a member of the Inspectorate) to the Chief Inspector, and
(b) if the report states that the person making it is of the opinion that special measures are required to be taken in relation to the school or that the school requires significant improvement and either—
(i) that person is a member of the Inspectorate, or
(ii) the report states that the Chief Inspector agrees with his opinion,
send a copy of the report and summary to the Assembly.
(2) In a case where—
(a) a report of an inspection of a school other than a maintained school is made by a member of the Inspectorate, and
(b) he is required by section 35(1)(b) to state in the report that he is of the opinion that special measures are required to be taken in relation to the school or that the school requires significant improvement,
he must send a copy of the report together with the summary of it to the proprietor of the school and to the Assembly.
(3) In the case of a special school which is not a community ... special school, the proprietor of the school must without delay send a copy of any report and summary sent to him under subsection (1) or (2) to any local authority that are paying fees in respect of the attendance of a registered pupil at the school.
(4) The proprietor of the school must—
(a) make any report and summary sent to him under subsection (1) or (2) available for inspection by members of the public at such times and at such place as may be reasonable,
(b) provide a copy of the report and summary, free of charge or in prescribed cases on payment of such fee as he thinks fit (not exceeding the cost of supply) to any person who asks for one, and
(c) take such steps as are reasonably practicable to secure that every registered parent of a registered pupil at the school receives a copy of the summary within such period following receipt of the report by the authority as may be prescribed.
Your change, as a redline
41 Destination of reports: non-maintained schools
(1) In the case of a report of a section 28 inspection of a school other than a maintained school, the person making the report must without delay—
(a) send a copy of the report together with the summary of it—
(i) to the proprietor of the school, and
(ii) (unless the person making it is a member of the Inspectorate) to the Chief Inspector, and
(b) if the report states that the person making it is of the opinion that special measures are required to be taken in relation to the school or that the school requires significant improvement and either—
(i) that person is a member of the Inspectorate, or
(ii) the report states that the Chief Inspector agrees with his opinion,
send a copy of the report and summary to the Assembly.
(2) In a case where—
(a) a report of an inspection of a school other than a maintained school is made by a member of the Inspectorate, and
(b) he is required by section 35(1)(b) to state in the report that he is of the opinion that special measures are required to be taken in relation to the school or that the school requires significant improvement,
he must send a copy of the report together with the summary of it to the proprietor of the school and to the Assembly.
(3) In the case of a special school which is not a community ... special school, the proprietor of the school must without delay send a copy of any report and summary sent to him under subsection (1) or (2) to any local authority that are paying fees in respect of the attendance of a registered pupil at the school.
(4) The proprietor of the school must—
(a) make any report and summary sent to him under subsection (1) or (2) available for inspection by members of the public at such times and at such place as may be reasonable,
(b) provide a copy of the report and summary, free of charge or in prescribed cases on payment of such fee as he thinks fit (not exceeding the cost of supply) to any person who asks for one, and
(c) take such steps as are reasonably practicable to secure that every registered parent of a registered pupil at the school receives a copy of the summary within such period following receipt of the report by the authority as may be prescribed.
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