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As published
49 Procedure for inspections under section 48
(1) An inspection under section 48 must be carried out within such period as may be prescribed.
(2) When the inspection has been completed, the person conducting the inspection must, before the end of the period prescribed for the purposes of this subsection, prepare in writing a report of the inspection.
(3) The person conducting the inspection must, without delay, send the report to the governing body of the school concerned.
(4) The governing body must—
(a) make any such report available for inspection by members of the public, at such times and at such a place as may be reasonable,
(b) take such steps as are reasonably practicable to secure that every parent of a registered pupil at the school—
(i) for whom the school provides denominational education, or
(ii) who takes part in acts of collective worship the content of which falls to be inspected under section 48,
as the case may be, receives a copy of the report as soon as is reasonably practicable, and
(c) provide a copy of the report, free of charge or in prescribed cases on payment of such fee as they think fit (not exceeding the cost of supply) to any other person who asks for one.
Your change, as a redline
49 Procedure for inspections under section 48
(1) An inspection under section 48 must be carried out within such period as may be prescribed.
(2) When the inspection has been completed, the person conducting the inspection must, before the end of the period prescribed for the purposes of this subsection, prepare in writing a report of the inspection.
(3) The person conducting the inspection must, without delay, send the report to the governing body of the school concerned.
(4) The governing body must—
(a) make any such report available for inspection by members of the public, at such times and at such a place as may be reasonable,
(b) take such steps as are reasonably practicable to secure that every parent of a registered pupil at the school—
(i) for whom the school provides denominational education, or
(ii) who takes part in acts of collective worship the content of which falls to be inspected under section 48,
as the case may be, receives a copy of the report as soon as is reasonably practicable, and
(c) provide a copy of the report, free of charge or in prescribed cases on payment of such fee as they think fit (not exceeding the cost of supply) to any other person who asks for one.
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