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As published
§ 1. Arestimaja sisekorraeeskirja rakendusala
(1) Arestimaja sisekorraeeskiri täpsustab isikute (edaspidi kinnipeetu) kinnipidamise tingimusi ja korda arestimajas.
(2) Kinnipeetu kohta käivaid sätteid kohaldatakse kõigile arestimajas kinnipeetavatele isikutele, kui käesolevas määruses ei ole sätestatud teisiti.
Your change, as a redline
§ 1. Arestimaja sisekorraeeskirja rakendusala
(1) Arestimaja sisekorraeeskiri täpsustab isikute (edaspidi kinnipeetu) kinnipidamise tingimusi ja korda arestimajas.
(2) Kinnipeetu kohta käivaid sätteid kohaldatakse kõigile arestimajas kinnipeetavatele isikutele, kui käesolevas määruses ei ole sätestatud teisiti.
One line that says what changes, such as "Halve the dog tax".
Who it helps, what it costs, what it fixes. It is what persuades people to support it.
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