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Change 1
As published
5-C:11 Decorative Heirloom Certificates.
I. The registrar shall, upon request and payment of the fee, supply to any applicant having a direct and tangible interest as provided in RSA 5-C:9 and RSA 5-C:102, a decorative heirloom certificate of any birth or marriage registered with him or her.
II. The decorative heirloom certificate shall be of a distinctive design and shall include the seal of the registrar and an original signature.
III. The fee for each decorative heirloom certificate shall be $25. The registrar shall forward $15 of each fee collected to the state treasurer for deposit into the vital records improvement fund established under RSA 5-C:15.
Source. 2005, 268:1, eff. Jan. 1, 2006.
Your change, as a redline
5-C:11 Decorative Heirloom Certificates.
I. The registrar shall, upon request and payment of the fee, supply to any applicant having a direct and tangible interest as provided in RSA 5-C:9 and RSA 5-C:102, a decorative heirloom certificate of any birth or marriage registered with him or her.
II. The decorative heirloom certificate shall be of a distinctive design and shall include the seal of the registrar and an original signature.
III. The fee for each decorative heirloom certificate shall be $25. The registrar shall forward $15 of each fee collected to the state treasurer for deposit into the vital records improvement fund established under RSA 5-C:15.
Source. 2005, 268:1, eff. Jan. 1, 2006.
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