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As published
5-C:18 Annual Report.
The department shall prepare and file a report on the uses of the vital records improvement fund and shall submit the report to the vital records improvement advisory committee no later than December 31 of each year. The report shall contain the following:
I. The gross revenue received by the fund.
II. A summary of receipts and expenditures, according to uniform classifications.
III. Accomplishments achieved pursuant to RSA 5-C during the preceding fiscal year.
IV. An outline of the projects and programs to be conducted in the ensuing fiscal year with proceeds from the funds.
V. Any recommendations for additional legislation, and other relevant matters.
Source. 2005, 268:1, eff. Jan. 1, 2006.
Your change, as a redline
5-C:18 Annual Report.
The department shall prepare and file a report on the uses of the vital records improvement fund and shall submit the report to the vital records improvement advisory committee no later than December 31 of each year. The report shall contain the following:
I. The gross revenue received by the fund.
II. A summary of receipts and expenditures, according to uniform classifications.
III. Accomplishments achieved pursuant to RSA 5-C during the preceding fiscal year.
IV. An outline of the projects and programs to be conducted in the ensuing fiscal year with proceeds from the funds.
V. Any recommendations for additional legislation, and other relevant matters.
Source. 2005, 268:1, eff. Jan. 1, 2006.
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