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As published
FOURTH SCHEDULE Ancillary Rights that may be conferred by a Compulsory Rights Order
Sections 12 and 12A .
1 A right for any person authorised by the person for whose benefit the compulsory rights order enures to pass over the land comprised in the order for the purpose of getting to or from the pipe-line on foot or with vehicles, and, where the right specified by the order is one of passing with vehicles, to transport materials, plant and apparatus therein.
2 A right to place, continue or renew markers for indicating the position of the pipe-line in so far as it is placed below the surface of the land comprised in the order.
3 A right to erect stiles, gates, bridges or culverts for the facilitation of access to the pipe-line.
4 A right to construct such works accessory to the pipe-line as may be specified in the order, being works for the facilitation of maintenance or inspection of the pipe-line or for protecting it from damage.
5 A right temporarily to place on the land comprised in the order materials, plant or apparatus required in connection with the pipe-line and brought on to the land by a vehicle in pursuance of such a right as is mentioned in paragraph 1 of this Schedule.
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FOURTH SCHEDULE Ancillary Rights that may be conferred by a Compulsory Rights Order
Sections 12 and 12A .
1 A right for any person authorised by the person for whose benefit the compulsory rights order enures to pass over the land comprised in the order for the purpose of getting to or from the pipe-line on foot or with vehicles, and, where the right specified by the order is one of passing with vehicles, to transport materials, plant and apparatus therein.
2 A right to place, continue or renew markers for indicating the position of the pipe-line in so far as it is placed below the surface of the land comprised in the order.
3 A right to erect stiles, gates, bridges or culverts for the facilitation of access to the pipe-line.
4 A right to construct such works accessory to the pipe-line as may be specified in the order, being works for the facilitation of maintenance or inspection of the pipe-line or for protecting it from damage.
5 A right temporarily to place on the land comprised in the order materials, plant or apparatus required in connection with the pipe-line and brought on to the land by a vehicle in pursuance of such a right as is mentioned in paragraph 1 of this Schedule.
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