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Change 1
As published
58 Exclusion of application of Act to, and in relation to, pipe-lines of certain statutory bodies.
(1) The bodies to which this section applies are—
(a) a public gas transporter within the meaning of Part I of the Gas Act 1986;
(c)—(e) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(f) the United Kingdom Atomic Energy Authority.
(2) Section one of this Act shall not apply to works executed by a body to which this section applies.
(3) The following provisions of this Act shall not apply to a body to which this section applies, namely, sections eleven, twelve and fifteen, subsection (1) of section seventeen, and sections twenty, twenty-three, twenty-five, thirty-nine, and forty-five.
(4) In the following provisions of this Act, namely, subsection (2) of section seventeen . . . , section twenty-six, section 26A subsection (1) of section twenty-seven, subsection (1) of section thirty-one, subsection (1) of section thirty-three, subsection (1) of section thirty-six, and sections thirty-seven, thirty-eight, forty . . . , references to a pipe-line shall be construed as not including references to a pipe-line vested in a body to which this section applies.
(4A) References in sections 9A and 10 of this Act to an additional pipe-line shall be construed as not including references to a pipe-line constructed by and vested in, or proposed to be constructed by and proposed to be vested in, a public gas transporter within the meaning of Part I of the Gas Act 1986.
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Your change, as a redline
58 Exclusion of application of Act to, and in relation to, pipe-lines of certain statutory bodies.
(1) The bodies to which this section applies are—
(a) a public gas transporter within the meaning of Part I of the Gas Act 1986;
(c)—(e) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(f) the United Kingdom Atomic Energy Authority.
(2) Section one of this Act shall not apply to works executed by a body to which this section applies.
(3) The following provisions of this Act shall not apply to a body to which this section applies, namely, sections eleven, twelve and fifteen, subsection (1) of section seventeen, and sections twenty, twenty-three, twenty-five, thirty-nine, and forty-five.
(4) In the following provisions of this Act, namely, subsection (2) of section seventeen . . . , section twenty-six, section 26A subsection (1) of section twenty-seven, subsection (1) of section thirty-one, subsection (1) of section thirty-three, subsection (1) of section thirty-six, and sections thirty-seven, thirty-eight, forty . . . , references to a pipe-line shall be construed as not including references to a pipe-line vested in a body to which this section applies.
(4A) References in sections 9A and 10 of this Act to an additional pipe-line shall be construed as not including references to a pipe-line constructed by and vested in, or proposed to be constructed by and proposed to be vested in, a public gas transporter within the meaning of Part I of the Gas Act 1986.
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