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As published
25-4-103. Personal record to be prepared; rehabilitation
plan; periodic review; additional contents of record; release from custody.
(a) When a girl is admitted to the girls' school, the superintendent shall prepare a record of the personal history of the resident, including her age, family and social background, education and prior training and employment. Based upon all pertinent information available, the superintendent shall prepare an individualized rehabilitation plan which shall be part of the resident's record. Periodic reviews of the resident's progress and appropriate modifications of her rehabilitation plan shall be made by the superintendent and entered on the resident's record. The status of each resident shall be reported to her periodically. All orders affecting the resident, the circumstances of her final release and any new developments concerning her personal history shall be included in her record.
(b) After the department of family services has made a finding that a girl should be released from the girls' school, it shall give advance notification of the pending release to the court which ordered commitment. Upon the girl's release the department shall issue her an administrative discharge.
Your change, as a redline
25-4-103. Personal record to be prepared; rehabilitation
plan; periodic review; additional contents of record; release from custody.
(a) When a girl is admitted to the girls' school, the superintendent shall prepare a record of the personal history of the resident, including her age, family and social background, education and prior training and employment. Based upon all pertinent information available, the superintendent shall prepare an individualized rehabilitation plan which shall be part of the resident's record. Periodic reviews of the resident's progress and appropriate modifications of her rehabilitation plan shall be made by the superintendent and entered on the resident's record. The status of each resident shall be reported to her periodically. All orders affecting the resident, the circumstances of her final release and any new developments concerning her personal history shall be included in her record.
(b) After the department of family services has made a finding that a girl should be released from the girls' school, it shall give advance notification of the pending release to the court which ordered commitment. Upon the girl's release the department shall issue her an administrative discharge.
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