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69 Variation and revocation of orders under Part IV, etc.
(1) The power conferred by section 266 below to vary and revoke orders under this Act shall, in the case of orders under this Part of this Act, apply only in relation to any supplementary provision contained in any such order, and an order varying or revoking any such provision shall only be made after compliance with subsections (2) and (3) below.
(2) The Secretary of State or Welsh principal council proposing to make any such varying or revoking order shall prepare a draft of the order, shall send copies of the draft to such local or public authorities as appear to him or them to be concerned, and shall give public notice, in such manner as appears to him or them sufficient for informing persons likely to be concerned, that the draft has been prepared, that a copy of the draft is available for inspection at a place specified in the notice and that representations with respect to the draft may be made to him or them within two months of the publication of the notice.
(3) The Secretary of State or Welsh principal council shall consider any representations duly made with respect to the draft and may, if he or they think fit, make an order either in the form of the draft or subject to modifications.
(4) The Secretary of State or a Welsh principal council may cause a local inquiry to be held with respect to the draft and section 250(2), (3) and (5) below shall apply in relation to an inquiry held under this subsection by a . . . council with the substitution for references to a Minister of references to the council.
(5) Any supplementary provision contained in an order made by a Minister of the Crown under any of the following enactments (being enactments making provision corresponding to some or all of the foregoing provisions of this Part of this Act), that is to say—
(a) section 46 of the Local Government Act 1929;
(b) Part VI of the 1933 Act;
(c) Part II of the Local Government Act 1958;
(d) section 6 of the 1963 Act;
(e) any enactment repealed by the 1933 Act and corresponding to any enactment in the said Part VI;
may be varied or revoked by an order made by the Secretary of State, and subsections (2) to (4) above shall apply in relation to any such order as they apply in relation to orders varying or revoking orders under this Part of this Act.
(6) Any supplementary provision contained in an order made under any of the enactments mentioned in subsection (5) above by any predecessor of a Welsh principal council may be varied or revoked in relation to any Welsh principal area to which or part of which that provision relates by an order made by the council of that area, and subsections (2) to (4) above shall apply with all necessary modifications in relation to any such order as they apply in relation to orders varying or revoking orders under this Part of this Act.
(7) In this section “supplementary provision” means any such provision as could be made by an order under this Part of this Act by virtue of section 67 above or section 255 below.
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69 Variation and revocation of orders under Part IV, etc.
(1) The power conferred by section 266 below to vary and revoke orders under this Act shall, in the case of orders under this Part of this Act, apply only in relation to any supplementary provision contained in any such order, and an order varying or revoking any such provision shall only be made after compliance with subsections (2) and (3) below.
(2) The Secretary of State or Welsh principal council proposing to make any such varying or revoking order shall prepare a draft of the order, shall send copies of the draft to such local or public authorities as appear to him or them to be concerned, and shall give public notice, in such manner as appears to him or them sufficient for informing persons likely to be concerned, that the draft has been prepared, that a copy of the draft is available for inspection at a place specified in the notice and that representations with respect to the draft may be made to him or them within two months of the publication of the notice.
(3) The Secretary of State or Welsh principal council shall consider any representations duly made with respect to the draft and may, if he or they think fit, make an order either in the form of the draft or subject to modifications.
(4) The Secretary of State or a Welsh principal council may cause a local inquiry to be held with respect to the draft and section 250(2), (3) and (5) below shall apply in relation to an inquiry held under this subsection by a . . . council with the substitution for references to a Minister of references to the council.
(5) Any supplementary provision contained in an order made by a Minister of the Crown under any of the following enactments (being enactments making provision corresponding to some or all of the foregoing provisions of this Part of this Act), that is to say—
(a) section 46 of the Local Government Act 1929;
(b) Part VI of the 1933 Act;
(c) Part II of the Local Government Act 1958;
(d) section 6 of the 1963 Act;
(e) any enactment repealed by the 1933 Act and corresponding to any enactment in the said Part VI;
may be varied or revoked by an order made by the Secretary of State, and subsections (2) to (4) above shall apply in relation to any such order as they apply in relation to orders varying or revoking orders under this Part of this Act.
(6) Any supplementary provision contained in an order made under any of the enactments mentioned in subsection (5) above by any predecessor of a Welsh principal council may be varied or revoked in relation to any Welsh principal area to which or part of which that provision relates by an order made by the council of that area, and subsections (2) to (4) above shall apply with all necessary modifications in relation to any such order as they apply in relation to orders varying or revoking orders under this Part of this Act.
(7) In this section “supplementary provision” means any such provision as could be made by an order under this Part of this Act by virtue of section 67 above or section 255 below.
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