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Convention intercantonale relative à la protection des données et à la transparence dans les cantons du Jura et de Neuchâtel

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As published

Art. 34

Quiconque a un intérêt légitime peut requérir du responsable du traitement qu’il: a) s’abstienne de procéder à un traitement illicite; b) supprime les effets d’un traitement illicite; c) constate le caractère illicite du traitement.

Your change, as a redline

Art. 34

Quiconque a un intérêt légitime peut requérir du responsable du traitement qu’il: a) s’abstienne de procéder à un traitement illicite; b) supprime les effets d’un traitement illicite; c) constate le caractère illicite du traitement.

One line that says what changes, such as "Halve the dog tax".

Who it helps, what it costs, what it fixes. It is what persuades people to support it.

A proposal here is not law. Support on Solon is evidence that people want the change; the official route says what it takes to make it law.

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