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As published
28-3-104. Chief clerk.
(a) There shall be a chief clerk whose duties shall be:
(i) To keep a correct journal of the proceedings of the senate;
(ii) To read aloud all papers handed to him for that purpose by any member;
(iii) To certify and transmit to the house of representatives all bills, resolutions and other papers requiring the concurrence of said house, immediately after its passage;
(iv) To notify the house on the concurrence or disagreement by the senate in any vote of the house;
(v) To permit no papers or records belonging to the senate to be taken out of his custody otherwise than in the regular course of business;
(vi) To perform all other duties pertaining to his office under the direction of the president.
Your change, as a redline
28-3-104. Chief clerk.
(a) There shall be a chief clerk whose duties shall be:
(i) To keep a correct journal of the proceedings of the senate;
(ii) To read aloud all papers handed to him for that purpose by any member;
(iii) To certify and transmit to the house of representatives all bills, resolutions and other papers requiring the concurrence of said house, immediately after its passage;
(iv) To notify the house on the concurrence or disagreement by the senate in any vote of the house;
(v) To permit no papers or records belonging to the senate to be taken out of his custody otherwise than in the regular course of business;
(vi) To perform all other duties pertaining to his office under the direction of the president.
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