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16 User empowerment duties: interpretation
(1) In determining what is proportionate for the purposes of section 15(2), the following factors, in particular, are relevant—
(a) all the findings of the most recent assessment under section 14, and
(b) the size and capacity of the provider of the service.
(2) Section 15(2) applies to content that—
(a) is regulated user-generated content in relation to the service in question, and
(b) is within subsection (3), (4) or (5).
(3) Content is within this subsection if it encourages, promotes or provides instructions for—
(a) suicide or an act of deliberate self-injury, or
(b) an eating disorder or behaviours associated with an eating disorder.
(4) Content is within this subsection if it is abusive and the abuse targets any of the following characteristics—
(a) race,
(b) religion,
(c) sex,
(d) sexual orientation,
(e) disability, or
(f) gender reassignment.
(5) Content is within this subsection if it incites hatred against people—
(a) of a particular race, religion, sex or sexual orientation,
(b) who have a disability, or
(c) who have the characteristic of gender reassignment.
(6) The duty set out in section 15(5) applies in relation to all registered adult users, not just those who begin to use a service after that duty begins to apply.
(7) In section 15 and this section—
“disability” means any physical or mental impairment;
“injury” includes poisoning;
“non-verified user” means a user who—
is an individual, whether in the United Kingdom or outside it, and
has not verified their identity to the provider of a service;
“race” includes colour, nationality, and ethnic or national origins.
(8) In section 15 and this section—
(a) references to features include references to functionalities and settings, and
(b) references to religion include references to a lack of religion.
(9) For the purposes of section 15 and this section, a person has the characteristic of gender reassignment if the person is proposing to undergo, is undergoing or has undergone a process (or part of a process) for the purpose of reassigning the person’s sex by changing physiological or other attributes of sex, and the reference to gender reassignment in subsection (4) is to be construed accordingly.
(10) See also, in relation to duties set out in section 15, section 22 (duties about freedom of expression and privacy).
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16 User empowerment duties: interpretation
(1) In determining what is proportionate for the purposes of section 15(2), the following factors, in particular, are relevant—
(a) all the findings of the most recent assessment under section 14, and
(b) the size and capacity of the provider of the service.
(2) Section 15(2) applies to content that—
(a) is regulated user-generated content in relation to the service in question, and
(b) is within subsection (3), (4) or (5).
(3) Content is within this subsection if it encourages, promotes or provides instructions for—
(a) suicide or an act of deliberate self-injury, or
(b) an eating disorder or behaviours associated with an eating disorder.
(4) Content is within this subsection if it is abusive and the abuse targets any of the following characteristics—
(a) race,
(b) religion,
(c) sex,
(d) sexual orientation,
(e) disability, or
(f) gender reassignment.
(5) Content is within this subsection if it incites hatred against people—
(a) of a particular race, religion, sex or sexual orientation,
(b) who have a disability, or
(c) who have the characteristic of gender reassignment.
(6) The duty set out in section 15(5) applies in relation to all registered adult users, not just those who begin to use a service after that duty begins to apply.
(7) In section 15 and this section—
“disability” means any physical or mental impairment;
“injury” includes poisoning;
“non-verified user” means a user who—
is an individual, whether in the United Kingdom or outside it, and
has not verified their identity to the provider of a service;
“race” includes colour, nationality, and ethnic or national origins.
(8) In section 15 and this section—
(a) references to features include references to functionalities and settings, and
(b) references to religion include references to a lack of religion.
(9) For the purposes of section 15 and this section, a person has the characteristic of gender reassignment if the person is proposing to undergo, is undergoing or has undergone a process (or part of a process) for the purpose of reassigning the person’s sex by changing physiological or other attributes of sex, and the reference to gender reassignment in subsection (4) is to be construed accordingly.
(10) See also, in relation to duties set out in section 15, section 22 (duties about freedom of expression and privacy).
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