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As published
§ 60. Üldnõuded
(1)
(2) Elektriseadmestik peab tagama:
1) elektrivarustuse laeva normaalseks käitamiseks ja elamistingimuste tagamiseks ilma avariielektrienergiaallika ressurssi arvestamata;
2) elektrienergiaga varustamise erinevate hädaolukorra tingimuste korral;
3) reisijate, laevapere ja laeva ohutuse seoses elektrivoolu kasutamisega.
Your change, as a redline
§ 60. Üldnõuded
(1)
(2) Elektriseadmestik peab tagama:
1) elektrivarustuse laeva normaalseks käitamiseks ja elamistingimuste tagamiseks ilma avariielektrienergiaallika ressurssi arvestamata;
2) elektrienergiaga varustamise erinevate hädaolukorra tingimuste korral;
3) reisijate, laevapere ja laeva ohutuse seoses elektrivoolu kasutamisega.
One line that says what changes, such as "Halve the dog tax".
Who it helps, what it costs, what it fixes. It is what persuades people to support it.
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