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As published
101 Military application
(1) This Part shall not apply to a function or activity which is performed or carried out by a member of any of Her Majesty's forces (within the meaning of the Armed Forces Act 2006) , acting in the course of his duties.
(2) This Part shall not apply to a function or activity which is performed or carried out by—
(a) a member of a visiting force, within the meaning which that expression has in section 3 of the Visiting Forces Act 1952 (c. 67) by virtue of section 12(1) of that Act, acting in the course of his duties, or
(b) a member of a civilian component of a visiting force, within that meaning, acting in the course of his duties.
(3) This Part shall not apply to a function or activity which is performed or carried out by a military or civilian member of a headquarters, within the meaning given by paragraphs 1 and 2 of the Schedule to the International Headquarters and Defence Organisations Act 1964 (c. 5), acting in the course of his duties.
Your change, as a redline
101 Military application
(1) This Part shall not apply to a function or activity which is performed or carried out by a member of any of Her Majesty's forces (within the meaning of the Armed Forces Act 2006) , acting in the course of his duties.
(2) This Part shall not apply to a function or activity which is performed or carried out by—
(a) a member of a visiting force, within the meaning which that expression has in section 3 of the Visiting Forces Act 1952 (c. 67) by virtue of section 12(1) of that Act, acting in the course of his duties, or
(b) a member of a civilian component of a visiting force, within that meaning, acting in the course of his duties.
(3) This Part shall not apply to a function or activity which is performed or carried out by a military or civilian member of a headquarters, within the meaning given by paragraphs 1 and 2 of the Schedule to the International Headquarters and Defence Organisations Act 1964 (c. 5), acting in the course of his duties.
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