Write the words of this act the way you think they should read. Solon shows your change as a redline against the published text and pins it to that exact text, so it can never be applied to wording you did not see.
Change 1
As published
10 Cash on delivery service.
(1), (2) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(3) Where a cash on delivery packet is delivered in the British postal area . . . without the sums payable in respect thereof having been paid, the Post Office may by notice in writing require the addressee within the time specified in the notice either to pay the said sums or to redeliver the packet intact to the Post Office, and if the addressee fails to comply with the notice the Post Office shall be entitled to recover the said sums . . . from the addressee.
(4), (5) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Your change, as a redline
10 Cash on delivery service.
(1), (2) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(3) Where a cash on delivery packet is delivered in the British postal area . . . without the sums payable in respect thereof having been paid, the Post Office may by notice in writing require the addressee within the time specified in the notice either to pay the said sums or to redeliver the packet intact to the Post Office, and if the addressee fails to comply with the notice the Post Office shall be entitled to recover the said sums . . . from the addressee.
(4), (5) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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