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As published
22 Issuing money orders with fraudulent intent.
(1) If any person engaged in the business of the Post Office grants or issues any money order with a fraudulent intent, he shall be guilty of a misdemeanour and be liable to imprisonment for a term not exceeding seven years.
(2) If any person engaged in the business of the Post Office re-issues a money order previously paid, he shall be deemed to have issued the order with a fraudulent intent for the purposes of this section.
Your change, as a redline
22 Issuing money orders with fraudulent intent.
(1) If any person engaged in the business of the Post Office grants or issues any money order with a fraudulent intent, he shall be guilty of a misdemeanour and be liable to imprisonment for a term not exceeding seven years.
(2) If any person engaged in the business of the Post Office re-issues a money order previously paid, he shall be deemed to have issued the order with a fraudulent intent for the purposes of this section.
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