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Change 1
As published
50 Indemnity on account of extending Post Office accommodation.
The Post Office may contract with, or take security from, any person applying to it to establish any post or telegraph office, or to extend the accommodations of the postal or telegraphic services to any place, for indemnifying the Post Office against any loss it may sustain thereby, and the indemnity may be either for the whole or any part of the loss sustained, and for such time as the Post Office may think necessary.
Your change, as a redline
50 Indemnity on account of extending Post Office accommodation.
The Post Office may contract with, or take security from, any person applying to it to establish any post or telegraph office, or to extend the accommodations of the postal or telegraphic services to any place, for indemnifying the Post Office against any loss it may sustain thereby, and the indemnity may be either for the whole or any part of the loss sustained, and for such time as the Post Office may think necessary.
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