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Change 1
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41 Meaning of transfer scheme.
(1) For the purposes of this Chapter a transfer scheme is a scheme which contains provisions falling within one or more of subsections (2) to (8).
(2) Provisions falling within this subsection are ones for the transfer of any of the CAA’s property, rights or liabilities or of all or part of its undertaking to any of the following—
(a) the Secretary of State;
(b) a company which is wholly owned by the Crown;
(c) a company which is wholly owned by the CAA;
(d) a company which is a wholly owned subsidiary of a company falling within paragraph (b) or (c).
(3) Provisions falling within this subsection are ones for the transfer of any of the property, rights or liabilities of a company (the transferor) which is wholly owned by the CAA or of all or part of the transferor’s undertaking to any of the following—
(a) the Secretary of State;
(b) the CAA;
(c) a company which is wholly owned by the Crown;
(d) a company which is wholly owned by the CAA;
(e) a company which is a wholly owned subsidiary of a company falling within paragraph (c) or (d).
(4) Provisions falling within this subsection are ones for the transfer of any of the property, rights or liabilities of a company (the transferor) which is a wholly owned subsidiary of a company wholly owned by the CAA, or of all or part of the transferor’s undertaking, to any of the following—
(a) the CAA;
(b) a company which is wholly owned by the Crown;
(c) a company which is wholly owned by the CAA;
(d) a company which is a wholly owned subsidiary of a company falling within paragraph (b) or (c).
(5) Provisions falling within this subsection are ones for the transfer of any of the property, rights or liabilities of a company (the transferor) which is wholly owned by the Crown but which was wholly owned by the CAA on the coming into force of this section, or of all or part of the transferor’s undertaking, to any of the following—
(a) a company which is wholly owned by the Crown;
(b) a company which is a wholly owned subsidiary of the transferor.
(6) Provisions falling within this subsection are ones for the transfer of any of the property, rights or liabilities of a company (the transferor) which is wholly owned by the Crown, or of all or part of the transferor’s undertaking, to the CAA.
(7) Provisions falling within this subsection are ones for the transfer of any of the property, rights or liabilities of a company (the transferor) in circumstances where the transferor is a wholly owned subsidiary of a company (the holding company) wholly owned by the Crown and the holding company was wholly owned by the CAA on the coming into force of this section, or of all or part of the transferor’s undertaking, to any of the following—
(a) a company which is wholly owned by the Crown;
(b) a company which is a wholly owned subsidiary of a company falling within paragraph (a).
(8) Provisions falling within this subsection are ones for the transfer of any of the property, rights or liabilities of a company (the transferor) which is a wholly owned subsidiary of a company wholly owned by the Crown, or of all or part of the transferor’s undertaking, to the CAA.
(9) To the extent that a scheme provides for the transfer of all or part of an undertaking, references in the following provisions of this Chapter to property, rights and liabilities are to the undertaking or part (including property, rights and liabilities falling within it).
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41 Meaning of transfer scheme.
(1) For the purposes of this Chapter a transfer scheme is a scheme which contains provisions falling within one or more of subsections (2) to (8).
(2) Provisions falling within this subsection are ones for the transfer of any of the CAA’s property, rights or liabilities or of all or part of its undertaking to any of the following—
(a) the Secretary of State;
(b) a company which is wholly owned by the Crown;
(c) a company which is wholly owned by the CAA;
(d) a company which is a wholly owned subsidiary of a company falling within paragraph (b) or (c).
(3) Provisions falling within this subsection are ones for the transfer of any of the property, rights or liabilities of a company (the transferor) which is wholly owned by the CAA or of all or part of the transferor’s undertaking to any of the following—
(a) the Secretary of State;
(b) the CAA;
(c) a company which is wholly owned by the Crown;
(d) a company which is wholly owned by the CAA;
(e) a company which is a wholly owned subsidiary of a company falling within paragraph (c) or (d).
(4) Provisions falling within this subsection are ones for the transfer of any of the property, rights or liabilities of a company (the transferor) which is a wholly owned subsidiary of a company wholly owned by the CAA, or of all or part of the transferor’s undertaking, to any of the following—
(a) the CAA;
(b) a company which is wholly owned by the Crown;
(c) a company which is wholly owned by the CAA;
(d) a company which is a wholly owned subsidiary of a company falling within paragraph (b) or (c).
(5) Provisions falling within this subsection are ones for the transfer of any of the property, rights or liabilities of a company (the transferor) which is wholly owned by the Crown but which was wholly owned by the CAA on the coming into force of this section, or of all or part of the transferor’s undertaking, to any of the following—
(a) a company which is wholly owned by the Crown;
(b) a company which is a wholly owned subsidiary of the transferor.
(6) Provisions falling within this subsection are ones for the transfer of any of the property, rights or liabilities of a company (the transferor) which is wholly owned by the Crown, or of all or part of the transferor’s undertaking, to the CAA.
(7) Provisions falling within this subsection are ones for the transfer of any of the property, rights or liabilities of a company (the transferor) in circumstances where the transferor is a wholly owned subsidiary of a company (the holding company) wholly owned by the Crown and the holding company was wholly owned by the CAA on the coming into force of this section, or of all or part of the transferor’s undertaking, to any of the following—
(a) a company which is wholly owned by the Crown;
(b) a company which is a wholly owned subsidiary of a company falling within paragraph (a).
(8) Provisions falling within this subsection are ones for the transfer of any of the property, rights or liabilities of a company (the transferor) which is a wholly owned subsidiary of a company wholly owned by the Crown, or of all or part of the transferor’s undertaking, to the CAA.
(9) To the extent that a scheme provides for the transfer of all or part of an undertaking, references in the following provisions of this Chapter to property, rights and liabilities are to the undertaking or part (including property, rights and liabilities falling within it).
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