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Change 1
As published
19 Register of licences and orders.
(1) The Director shall keep a register of licences granted under section 7 above and final and provisional orders at such premises and in such form as he may determine.
(2) Subject to any direction given under subsection (3) below, the Director shall cause to be entered in the register the provisions of—
(a) every licence granted under section 7 above and every modification or revocation of, and every direction or consent given or determination made under, such a licence; and
(b) every final or provisional order, every revocation of such an order and every notice under section 16(5) above.
(3) If it appears to the Secretary of State that the entry of any provision in the register would be against the public interest or the commercial interests of any person, he may direct the Director not to enter that provision in the register.
(4) The register shall be open to public inspection during such hours and subject to payment of such fee as may be prescribed by an order made by the Secretary of State.
(5) Any person may, on payment of such fee as may be prescribed by an order so made, require the Director to supply to him a copy of or extract from any part of the register, certified by the Director to be a true copy or extract.
(6) Any sums received by the Director under this section shall be paid into the Consolidated Fund.
Your change, as a redline
19 Register of licences and orders.
(1) The Director shall keep a register of licences granted under section 7 above and final and provisional orders at such premises and in such form as he may determine.
(2) Subject to any direction given under subsection (3) below, the Director shall cause to be entered in the register the provisions of—
(a) every licence granted under section 7 above and every modification or revocation of, and every direction or consent given or determination made under, such a licence; and
(b) every final or provisional order, every revocation of such an order and every notice under section 16(5) above.
(3) If it appears to the Secretary of State that the entry of any provision in the register would be against the public interest or the commercial interests of any person, he may direct the Director not to enter that provision in the register.
(4) The register shall be open to public inspection during such hours and subject to payment of such fee as may be prescribed by an order made by the Secretary of State.
(5) Any person may, on payment of such fee as may be prescribed by an order so made, require the Director to supply to him a copy of or extract from any part of the register, certified by the Director to be a true copy or extract.
(6) Any sums received by the Director under this section shall be paid into the Consolidated Fund.
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