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27K Enforcement of standards of performance, etc.
(1) Sections 16 to 18 above shall apply in relation to a designated operator as if it were a condition of the licence granted to him under section 7 above that he shall—
(a) achieve the standards of overall performance determined in relation to him under section 27B above;
(b) take steps to inform those of his customers to whom he supplies relevant services about—
(i) those standards, and
(ii) the levels of performance which he has achieved as respects those standards,
in accordance with section 27D above;
(c) comply with—
(i) the requirements of section 27E above, and
(ii) any direction given by the Director under subsection (4) or (6) of that section;
(d) comply with any order made under section 27F(3) above;
(e) comply with any direction given by the Director under section 27H(6) above;
(f) comply with any direction given under section 27I(3) above; and
(g) comply with the requirements of section 27J above.
(2) For the purposes of the application by this section of sections 16 to 18 above, any term of a licence granted under section 7 above which has or which might have the effect—
(a) of excepting a designated operator from liability for a contravention of a condition of that licence, or
(b) otherwise restricting any such liability,
shall not apply in relation to any contravention of the condition mentioned in subsection (1) above.
Your change, as a redline
27K Enforcement of standards of performance, etc.
(1) Sections 16 to 18 above shall apply in relation to a designated operator as if it were a condition of the licence granted to him under section 7 above that he shall—
(a) achieve the standards of overall performance determined in relation to him under section 27B above;
(b) take steps to inform those of his customers to whom he supplies relevant services about—
(i) those standards, and
(ii) the levels of performance which he has achieved as respects those standards,
in accordance with section 27D above;
(c) comply with—
(i) the requirements of section 27E above, and
(ii) any direction given by the Director under subsection (4) or (6) of that section;
(d) comply with any order made under section 27F(3) above;
(e) comply with any direction given by the Director under section 27H(6) above;
(f) comply with any direction given under section 27I(3) above; and
(g) comply with the requirements of section 27J above.
(2) For the purposes of the application by this section of sections 16 to 18 above, any term of a licence granted under section 7 above which has or which might have the effect—
(a) of excepting a designated operator from liability for a contravention of a condition of that licence, or
(b) otherwise restricting any such liability,
shall not apply in relation to any contravention of the condition mentioned in subsection (1) above.
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