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34 Enforcement order: modification and revocation
(1) The CAA may—
(a) modify an enforcement order with the agreement of the person to whom it was given, or
(b) revoke an enforcement order.
(2) Before modifying or revoking the order, the CAA must—
(a) publish a notice in relation to the proposed modification or revocation,
(b) send a copy of the notice to the person to whom the order was given, and
(c) consider any representations made about the proposal in the period specified in the notice (and not withdrawn).
(3) The notice under subsection (2) must—
(a) state that the CAA proposes to modify or revoke the order,
(b) specify the proposed modification (if relevant),
(c) give the CAA's reasons for the modification or revocation, and
(d) specify a reasonable period for making representations.
(4) As soon as practicable after modifying or revoking an enforcement order, the CAA must—
(a) publish a notice giving details of the modification or revocation, and
(b) send a copy of the notice to the persons listed in subsection (5).
(5) Those persons are—
(a) the person to whom the enforcement order was given, and
(b) such bodies representing airport operators or providers of air transport services as the CAA considers appropriate.
Your change, as a redline
34 Enforcement order: modification and revocation
(1) The CAA may—
(a) modify an enforcement order with the agreement of the person to whom it was given, or
(b) revoke an enforcement order.
(2) Before modifying or revoking the order, the CAA must—
(a) publish a notice in relation to the proposed modification or revocation,
(b) send a copy of the notice to the person to whom the order was given, and
(c) consider any representations made about the proposal in the period specified in the notice (and not withdrawn).
(3) The notice under subsection (2) must—
(a) state that the CAA proposes to modify or revoke the order,
(b) specify the proposed modification (if relevant),
(c) give the CAA's reasons for the modification or revocation, and
(d) specify a reasonable period for making representations.
(4) As soon as practicable after modifying or revoking an enforcement order, the CAA must—
(a) publish a notice giving details of the modification or revocation, and
(b) send a copy of the notice to the persons listed in subsection (5).
(5) Those persons are—
(a) the person to whom the enforcement order was given, and
(b) such bodies representing airport operators or providers of air transport services as the CAA considers appropriate.
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