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29 Procedure in relation to orders under s. 28.
(1) As soon as may be after making such a representation as is mentioned in section 28(1) or (3) of this Act—
(a) the statutory undertakers, in a case falling within subsection (1) of that section, or
(b) the development corporation, in a case falling within subsection (3) thereof,
shall publish, in such form and manner as may be directed by the Secretary of State and the appropriate Minister, a notice giving such particulars as may be so directed of the matters to which the representation relates, and specifying the time (not being less than 28 days) within which, and the manner in which, objection to the making of an order on the representation may be made, and shall serve a like notice on any persons appearing from the valuation roll to have an interest in any land to which the representation relates, and shall also, if it is so directed by the Secretary of State and the appropriate Minister, serve a like notice on such other persons, or persons of such classes, as may be so directed.
(2) Orders under the said section 28 shall be subject to special parliamentary procedure.
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29 Procedure in relation to orders under s. 28.
(1) As soon as may be after making such a representation as is mentioned in section 28(1) or (3) of this Act—
(a) the statutory undertakers, in a case falling within subsection (1) of that section, or
(b) the development corporation, in a case falling within subsection (3) thereof,
shall publish, in such form and manner as may be directed by the Secretary of State and the appropriate Minister, a notice giving such particulars as may be so directed of the matters to which the representation relates, and specifying the time (not being less than 28 days) within which, and the manner in which, objection to the making of an order on the representation may be made, and shall serve a like notice on any persons appearing from the valuation roll to have an interest in any land to which the representation relates, and shall also, if it is so directed by the Secretary of State and the appropriate Minister, serve a like notice on such other persons, or persons of such classes, as may be so directed.
(2) Orders under the said section 28 shall be subject to special parliamentary procedure.
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