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As published
104 Exchequer grants and expenses of Secretary of State.
(1) There shall be paid out of money provided by Parliament—
(a) such sums on such conditions as the Secretary of State with the approval of the Treasury may recommend towards—
(i) the expenses of the managers of an approved school;
(ii) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(iii) the expenses of a council of a county or county borough in respect of remand homes;
(b) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(c) any expenses incurred by the Secretary of State in the administration of this Act.
(2) The conditions on which any sums are paid under this section towards the expenses incurred in connection with the provision of a site for, or with the erection, enlargement, improvement or repair of, an approved school, may include conditions for securing the repayment in whole or in part of the sums paid in the event of the school ceasing to be an approved school, and, notwithstanding anything in the constitution of the school or of the managers thereof, or in the trusts, if any, to which the property of the school or of the managers is subject, the managers and any persons who are trustees of any of the said property may accept those sums on those conditions, and execute any instrument required for carrying into effect those conditions, and shall be bound by those conditions and by any instrument so executed and have power to fulfil the conditions and the obligations created by the instrument.
Your change, as a redline
104 Exchequer grants and expenses of Secretary of State.
(1) There shall be paid out of money provided by Parliament—
(a) such sums on such conditions as the Secretary of State with the approval of the Treasury may recommend towards—
(i) the expenses of the managers of an approved school;
(ii) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(iii) the expenses of a council of a county or county borough in respect of remand homes;
(b) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(c) any expenses incurred by the Secretary of State in the administration of this Act.
(2) The conditions on which any sums are paid under this section towards the expenses incurred in connection with the provision of a site for, or with the erection, enlargement, improvement or repair of, an approved school, may include conditions for securing the repayment in whole or in part of the sums paid in the event of the school ceasing to be an approved school, and, notwithstanding anything in the constitution of the school or of the managers thereof, or in the trusts, if any, to which the property of the school or of the managers is subject, the managers and any persons who are trustees of any of the said property may accept those sums on those conditions, and execute any instrument required for carrying into effect those conditions, and shall be bound by those conditions and by any instrument so executed and have power to fulfil the conditions and the obligations created by the instrument.
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