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As published
53A Registration of providers of dynamic spectrum access services
(1) A person who provides, or proposes to provide, a dynamic spectrum access service may be registered under this section by OFCOM.
(2) An application for registration under this section—
(a) is to be made to OFCOM, and
(b) must contain such information as OFCOM may reasonably require.
(3) OFCOM must, from time to time as they think fit, publish—
(a) the criteria for determining applications under this section, and
(b) information relating to the restrictions and conditions to which registration under this section may be subject.
(4) The criteria published under subsection (3)(a) may include different provision for different cases.
(5) Registration under this section is to be for such period, and subject to such restrictions and conditions, as OFCOM think fit.
(6) Any such restrictions and conditions are to be contained in a notice in writing given to the person registered under this section.
(7) In this Act “dynamic spectrum access service” means a service that provides information about—
(a) the availability for use by wireless telegraphy stations and wireless telegraphy apparatus of frequencies that fall within a frequency band specified in regulations made by OFCOM, and
(b) the places in which, the power at which, the times when and any conditions subject to which such stations and apparatus may use such frequencies.
Your change, as a redline
53A Registration of providers of dynamic spectrum access services
(1) A person who provides, or proposes to provide, a dynamic spectrum access service may be registered under this section by OFCOM.
(2) An application for registration under this section—
(a) is to be made to OFCOM, and
(b) must contain such information as OFCOM may reasonably require.
(3) OFCOM must, from time to time as they think fit, publish—
(a) the criteria for determining applications under this section, and
(b) information relating to the restrictions and conditions to which registration under this section may be subject.
(4) The criteria published under subsection (3)(a) may include different provision for different cases.
(5) Registration under this section is to be for such period, and subject to such restrictions and conditions, as OFCOM think fit.
(6) Any such restrictions and conditions are to be contained in a notice in writing given to the person registered under this section.
(7) In this Act “dynamic spectrum access service” means a service that provides information about—
(a) the availability for use by wireless telegraphy stations and wireless telegraphy apparatus of frequencies that fall within a frequency band specified in regulations made by OFCOM, and
(b) the places in which, the power at which, the times when and any conditions subject to which such stations and apparatus may use such frequencies.
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